Our fists clenched, shaking ’em at the sky,
with a flood of irrational emotions, we cry.
Damn this existence of human life’s brevity,
We marvel the idea and covet longevity.
What would we do with an eternity, if we had it all?
We couldn’t enjoy memories, there’d be too many to recall.
Truth being, the only way you can appreciate life, or love anything,
is the notion that you can easily lose it, as it dangles from a string.
It’s just a fact that you long for more time only because it’s not infinite,
If you could say “I love you” for eternity, would you ever really say it?
It’s just the way it goes and there’s no way to stop the motion of science,
the stages are denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and vital acceptance.
As we grieve the end of a loved one’s journey,
hopefully, you spent that time as you both had wished,
as you recall all the great times, that used to be,
think…
if forever were possible, it may not have been so cherished.
Β© 2018 Joseph Emerson @ WhatsInsideAMadmansHat.com
Great piece. I particularly like this:
“Truth being, the only way you can appreciate life, or love anything,
is the notion that you can easily lose it, as it dangles from a string.”
LikeLiked by 3 people
Very cool. Thank you so much. I definitely appreciate the response. Glad you liked itπ
LikeLiked by 1 person
This one even more awesome ;)) could we say βI love uβ for eternity and would we remember all our love-s* (small and big)… itβs an idea for sci-fi book lol
LikeLiked by 2 people
Glad you like it, definitely means a lot π€ you can write the book… I’m too lazy lol.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha
If u start now, even if u r lazy, uβll finish 2020 or so ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s a great idea. Retirement plans. Assuming that it sells millions… and I’ll only be like 36. Yeah, that sounds sweet. lol
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a great story ππ you seee u r a fictional writer lol
Just kidding π – u can do it! πππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
ahahah snap. Thanks. We will see
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on My Loud Bipolar Whispers and commented:
I love this.. a new way to think of our journey of life, our future, forever, eternity and our life after our time on earth.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reposting and sharing. I’m always grateful. π€π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome and thank you for writing it. Your writing is incredible. You are very talented. Have a happy, healthy and fabulous day.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That means the world. You truly made my day. Thank you and same to you!! Be well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh yes, I would say “I’ll love you for eternity”. But, sadly it seems that my eternity is always longer than those I seem to love. Perhaps more proof that vampires do exist… To loosely quote Anne Rice she said in an interview that inspired a poem I wrote a while back, “Vampires, ghosts, and werewolves are nothing more than those who walk on the sidelines of life.” I found that concept so profound that it inspired an epic poem I wrote about my entire creative existence.
And then I would ask you to ponder this…. What is eternity??? How long is forever? In real life I think we can fall in love hundreds of times, but in literary terms it is much more appealing to imagine one love for all of eternity. Now that is the stuff of which dreams are made!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
oomph not sure how to answer that. I would have to really think about it.
LikeLike
Hits me in so many ways. You said :
“Damn this existence of human lifeβs brevity,
We marvel the idea and covet longevity.
What would we do with an eternity, if we had it all?
We couldnβt enjoy memories, thereβd be too many to recall..”
ManππΎππΎ
LikeLiked by 1 person
So glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and liking it. Means a lot.
LikeLiked by 1 person
WordππΎ!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a beautifully crafted poem. Yes, it is really true the would have cherished the life and it’s moments so much had it existed for infinity. Loved these lines”if forever were possible, it may not have been so cherished.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much. You’re too kind. glad you liked it. π€
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is intriguing in so many ways. What a view on all whatβs worth living – and dying for! Love it!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!!
LikeLike
Reblogged this on Beckie's Mental Mess and commented:
Outstandingly powerful! by Joseph Emerson’s “What’s Inside a Mad Mans Hat?” a must read, that is… π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Tremendous my friend! Very powerful, a must share!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much. Extremely flattered that you enjoy my work. Means a lot. π€
LikeLiked by 1 person
I very much enjoyed it. Applause coming your way! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! Brimming with meaning.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! Pleased you enjoyed it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Joseph, this is a beautiful reflection on the human experience. The power of awareness, (when I can be conscious of it) of my life ending on a random someday, makes my day glorious. Your wonderings about infinity are appreciated.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much. Happy you liked it and could relate to it so well. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This was heart touching , brilliant piece of art ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on Therapy Bits and commented:
A powerful piece of writing from the wonderful Joseph Emmerson and his blog what’s inside a mad mans hat…check it out!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so so much π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre more than welcome π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is beautiful writing!
LikeLike
Thank you so much! π€
LikeLiked by 1 person
π€ my pleasure!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well done Joe! Say “I love you” today. There is no promise of tomorrow!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly. Thank you and Thank you so much for reading π I’m always so grateful and appreciative π©
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are very welcome!! :>)
LikeLiked by 1 person