“I love this song”
I received the subtle hint
One so noteworthy
It needs no print.
I firmly took her hand
aided with her chair
a girl so absolutely stunning
it’s only fitting to stare.
The floor now crowded
we are no longer alone
though unease retracts
in each other’s arms, we’re home.
Lost in this feeling
captivated by the embrace
I am rendered speechless
by her flowing grace.
Each step, breath, and heartbeat
cherished as if it were our last
no dreaming of the future
surely no thoughts of past.
As the song nears its end
she starts to shed a tear
then the band strikes a chord again
the crowd begins to cheer.
© 2018 Joseph Emerson @ WhatsInsideAMadmansHat.com
Well done. I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much. 🤓
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Beautiful words so well articulated
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Thank you so much
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Welcome
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Lovely
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Thank you so much. Means a lot
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I really love this!
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you do.
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You’re welcome, my pleasure!
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Very delightful piece!
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Thank you so much. 🤓. Thanks to my dance teacher girlfriend who was the inspiration for it.
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Oh, now aren’t you the lucky one! I really loved this and perhaps you can use the inspiration of your girlfriend on the dance floor to write some other great pieces about dancing and love?
You may want to check out the pieces on my blog “Harmony” and Harmony in a Minor Key”. Great post!
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Absolutely. I will. Thanks again.
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