I watch, seeing you sitting there
looking so saddened and somber.
Unkept beard, thinning grey hair
couldn’t appear any more calmer.
Couldn’t help myself but to think
“what’s wrong in that head?”
Thinking, “could I buy you a drink?”
“Quite possibly a loaf of bread?”
Children walk on the other side
as they cautiously, yet hastily skip by.
While managing your dignity and pride
you don’t waste life wondering why.
Though, I now wish that my realization
of inaccuracy had come much sooner…
because after all this time,
I’ve come to find…
..you were just waiting for an Uber.
© 2018 Joseph Emerson @ WhatsInsideAMadmansHat.com
Nice one. Feels like when you just watch people in public trying to figure out what’s going on in their lives. Would make an interesting subject for a blog
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Yes. I used to sit at this gazebo on the beach by my house and I would make up ridiculous stories about the people that passed by. Would definitely be a cool blog topic.
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Haha!
Waiting for an uber?!😂
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😂
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Nice and simple words penned Joseph.
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I am nominating you for Liebster Award. You may find the Details over
https://aboveandbeyondtheinfinity.wordpress.com/2018/01/23/liebster-award/
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Daman, I am extremely flattered. Much appreciated. Although I have been nominated for this already, and I think the rules state that you can only be nominated once? Correct me if I am wrong… but I honestly love that fact that you thought of me enough to nominate me. Means the world. Thank you sooo sooo much.
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You are the already nominated because you so so deserves this ❤️ but you can write the answers to my questions in the same post.
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Ok that works !! Thanks for the idea. I was trying to think of a way to recognize you for nominating me and then I forgot to reply to you… My mind is whacked haha. I will get to this as soon as I can. Thanks again !!
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Good one – loved the last line!
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Yes. Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Just shows how quickly we sometimes judge an appearance our situation
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ha. this has great rhythm and i like the turn it takes.. guess we shouldn’t judge on appearance
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Thanks. Yeah it was a true story. We were making up stories for people in the city and I started to really feel empathetic for this dude and next thing ya know a Chrysler 300 pulls up and he pulls out his iPhone and gets in the back seat. I was like… “Whoa, way off”
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hahah yea that happens. you never really know i guess.. especially when looking homeless is sorta trendy right now
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Haha so true
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Uber line was the best part. Really good piece! Keep writing
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Yeah I loved that line. Haha. Thanks.
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You are an amazing writer. I know you have few nominations already, but anyway I would like to nominate you for the Liebster Award. Congratulations
penumbradotblog.wordpress.com/2018/02/02/liebster-award/
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Thank you so much. I need to catch up on these nominations… I’ve been swamped with work. I’ll try my darndest to check this out this weekend. Thanks again!! ✌️
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Love this hahaha
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Thank you so much. Thanks for reading👍
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Awesome post! i loved it,Joshep!
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Thank you so much. Thank you for reading
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You are always welcome.
Hv a great time!
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Love it!
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Awesome👍 thank you
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You have great compassion. I hope you use it on yourself too.
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I’m my worst critic and I beat myself up a lot. But it’s fuel to the art so… Double edged I guess
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Well, just know that others would not judge you harshly. Feel the love.
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